A Good Concept But In Need Of A Proof Read. – Spacing Out Review

The concept of the story is good and can be made even stronger by expanding on to the already existing foundation. While the story had some great parts, other parts felt rushed and sometimes a bit confusing. A good proof read is also needed to fix a lot of the misspellings and grammatical errors. Fix these mistakes and the overall flow of the story will improve. I will not feel as distracted be the wrong word or misspelled character names.
Review by DragonT411 on Spacing Out.