Sigh... – Sword of the Elements Review

I am a huge fan of Choice of Games, and even more of a fan of the games put on Hosted Games. I looked at the reviews before buying this, thinking that I could get past a few grammar mistakes, a few misspellings... I was wrong, for I couldn't get past the fourth page. The story seems fine, but it's too much of a pain to have to sit and think on what every sentence really is saying. I'm really hoping for an updated version so that I can enjoy what the author has created.
Review by Ronakk Zen on Sword of the Elements.