Sword of the Elements
| Category | Price | Seller | Device |
|---|---|---|---|
| Games | $1.99 | Hosted Games LLC | iPhone, iPad, iPod |
Are you ready to the journey to the world’s end?
Reviews
Uh...
Zig Ziggenstein
The game appears to have a complex role playing system to it. That's the only good thing as the author's use of English isn't very good. The story and characters would have gone a long way with some editing, and I can't help but wonder why Choice of Games gave this one a go. It is rather heartbreaking considering the time and effort that was put into making this game and I commend the author for such hard work. That can only get you so far though as the game becomes unintentionally hilarious with poor grammar and sentence structure. Perhaps with some editing I can recommend the game, but until then you might wanna pass.
So bad.
Rare scores
The writing is so terrible that I honestly gave up and deleted the app after 3 pages. I don't believe English is the authors first language, and I don't believe I would have enjoyed this app even if it had been free. Do not waste your money. Other review is likely written by the author. Read the writing in the description sample pages carefully and you'll see the problems.
Disappointing
Grace244
I don't really write reviews that often, but I just wanted to say that I found the mistakes and poor writing distracting. It's such a shame, because the concept could be truly great. I just wish the author had given this to an editor or just had someone read it, I couldn't even finish it. And another thing! Why the heck is it $1.99?! I spent 2 dollars on an unreadable story...
Bad grammar
Cashole71977
I'm not very far into the book, but I've had to stop reading already . The grammar is terrible and makes the story completely unreadable. It's almost like it was written in a different language and the editors just used a free web translator service and published it that way. Really needs some editing.
Do not buy this game!
Dapmeup
In it's current form this game is impossible to decipher. And for some reason the author uses the word "Azure" in almost every other sentence. The poor quality of this game is astounding and I am left to wonder how this game was released in it's current form.
Save Your Money
APersonOnAComp
I don't usually write reviews, but I had to warn others against buying this. The grammar is so bad I have a difficult time understanding what is going on most of the time. Your money would be better spent on another app. Seriously. Do not purchase.
Sigh...
Ronakk Zen
I am a huge fan of Choice of Games, and even more of a fan of the games put on Hosted Games. I looked at the reviews before buying this, thinking that I could get past a few grammar mistakes, a few misspellings... I was wrong, for I couldn't get past the fourth page. The story seems fine, but it's too much of a pain to have to sit and think on what every sentence really is saying. I'm really hoping for an updated version so that I can enjoy what the author has created.
Fairly good
Nightlash
The world depth was excellent and the story length was very good. That said the story could have been more understandable had the author used a English fluent editor. If the game had better English it would have been rated a 4.5 to 5 but at its current rating it is still a good game And expect much from this author in the future
My opinion
Jagshrvehevsj
I liked the story very much it seems well thought out. The down side is the grammar but personally this doesn't bother me all that much.
