Disappointing – Sword of the Elements Review

I don't really write reviews that often, but I just wanted to say that I found the mistakes and poor writing distracting. It's such a shame, because the concept could be truly great. I just wish the author had given this to an editor or just had someone read it, I couldn't even finish it. And another thing! Why the heck is it $1.99?! I spent 2 dollars on an unreadable story...
Review by Grace244 on Sword of the Elements.