Good story but ugh – Fatehaven Review

While the author is a good storyteller, oftentimes he veers forcibly into what is obviously his own unfortunate juvenile fantasies. I have a fairly high tolerance for that sort of thing, but what pushed me to write about it is that it is forced on you whether you yourself are interested or not. You have no ability to opt out of it and it just. keeps. going. Besides these moments the story is quite interesting, which is why this is a two and not a one.
Review by Ano1073 on Fatehaven.