It's called Editing – Elemental Saga: The Awakening Review

Loaded with typos and poor grammar. Story had lots and lots of potential but its start was very slow. Then came the MAJOR leaps in logic and story gaps. Example: I'm playing band I get to my new room and there are 4 people there. They start talking like they know me. Only I as the reader never read about meeting them. They just pop up and I'm scratching my head wondering if I missed a page??? Think Magicians tv show only worse. Thank goodness no one had to pay for this. IF BIG if you are willing to play along and create your own understanding of the story it could be a two star rating.
Review by Unidraconus on Elemental Saga: The Awakening.