I gave it a try... – Academy of Disaster Review

I read this on a flight from London to Phoenix...it somehow made the 10 hour flight seem even longer. The story, suffering from excessive adjectives and monotony, is one long linear narrative with scarce input from the reader. When there was input, the options were so similar that their existence was perplexing. In multiple cases there was only one option present. The main character was Bella Swan's doppelgänger ...fumbling, bumbling, and I found it impossible to care about what happens. Normally I play through Choice stories several times since they pique my interest...this is not the case for this story.
Review by CommodoreVillefort on Academy of Disaster.