Um no? – Captive of Fortune Review

I' not sure what those other reviewers have read, but this game is massively disappointing. I've played the majority of both hosted and choice of games and this game is not up to par. The main plot line is a decent idea and if executed better, it would be great. However, this novel is riddled with grammatical and spelling errors. Not only that, a few places the scene jumps and it is unexplained. Then your character switches gender pronouns and sometimes you interact with yourself by mistake. The story itself is rather short and seems rushed. I won't pay $1.99 for this. I might not even recommend it if it were free. The best hope for this game would be for the author to explain the story to someone else and have a good writer actually put it together.
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