Very poorly written – Dancing with Demons Review

I've read hundreds of CYOAs, and I typically enjoy even the roughest examples of the genre. That is not the case with "Demons". I had to force myself to finish reading this, even though I wanted nothing more than to stop after the first few pages. This is a truly awful CYOA. I don't usually write negative reviews, and I feel a bit guilty writing this one, but since it isn't free I feel it is my duty. It's just horribly written, plain and simple. It's lazy, rushed, filled with grammatical errors and obvious gaps in the story. This should never have been published, and certainly not with a price tag.
Review by SturmBrightblade on Dancing with Demons.