Good to a point... – Treasure Seekers of Lady Luck Review

During the story line there are strange changes in interactions with one scene to the next, almost like you did something that you never experienced in the story line, or it's a generic answer to a question you could have (but didn't) ask. Also about half way through the story one of the main characters changes from a woman to a man! I think the he/she switch Ruined the immersion for me, so much so that I stopped reading to post this as a warning. I like the story however, but the words and grammar are way off at points and need attention. So it's Good to a point and bad too, do give me confusing plot that never happened. Like "You lost the officer in the commotion." When I never met one, and "I don't want to be alone again." When I never was or never chose to go off alone in the first place. There are many more "what the?" Moments too.
Review by JKStones on Treasure Seekers of Lady Luck.