Narborion Saga Reviews

Needs polish

artfoundry

This gamebooks is just not ready for release. It's filled with grammar errors and has some UI glitches (like the tappable area for each spell in the spellbook is above the spell name). The writing is ok but not amazing. Graphics are nice. There are lots of gamebooks that are better, though at least this is free.

Awesome

Shawskywalker

This is a really cool app. I love the story and the way it's played. It's a good book and and awesome game!

It's okay

Drkn56n

Very fun concept, compelling and slightly addicting but can seem impossibly hard at times. Restarted many times, tried all possible options but still seem to come up short in combat :(

Good story, bad writing

Lololololol etc.

Please read over your work, all of it carefully. Or have someone else look over it. Because the typos and awkward sentences are strong with this one. Fix this along with finding better names for just about everything, add a little more explanation of what things, significant events, and religious figures are. you have a five star worthy game on your hands.

A story about a thief

Ant55ohio

The thief is the creator. In order to play this you absolutely MUST spend real money. You start out with 5 gold coins which gets you next to nothing. You can't even save (bookmark) because that costs 6 coins. And there's no way to complete it without saving because no armor and no weapon means certain death and no save means you start over at the beginning. I was thinking you'd earn gold or find weapons and armor, but so far that isn't the case. The only reason I gave it 2 stars is because I used love choose your own adventure books. If you're willing to spend the money, however; this could be a great game.

The most fun to be had!

Teddyraytolley

This is more than just a choose your adventure game. There are a lot of puzzles to solve, some of which you must copy down and take your time solving. You may not need the paid version to complete the game but I was more than happy to buy it just to show my appreciation for their game. I highly recommend this book/game. Enjoy!