Elemental Saga: The Awakening

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4/5 rating based on 26 reviews. Read all reviews for Elemental Saga: The Awakening for iPhone.
Elemental Saga: The Awakening is free iOS app published by Hosted Games LLC

At least run it through a grammar checker

todddster

Story could be good, but English is obviously not the author's first language. It seems as though the story was written in a different language and then translated to English. Poor spelling, grammar, etc.

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Mark Riddle17

The story kinda just did it's own thing regardless of what the player chose to do. And the lack of player choice makes it less of if a text based game. Grammar is definitely a huge problem in the game. It looked like they never ran a spell check in it cause I saw "thier" instead of their at least twice.

Proofread

Emo teen girls everywhere

Double negatives, Bad grammar, comes off kinda forced because of the bad flow. It's a good story but story really needs an editor or something, would make it a lot smoother and easier to read.

It's called Editing

Unidraconus

Loaded with typos and poor grammar. Story had lots and lots of potential but its start was very slow. Then came the MAJOR leaps in logic and story gaps. Example: I'm playing band I get to my new room and there are 4 people there. They start talking like they know me. Only I as the reader never read about meeting them. They just pop up and I'm scratching my head wondering if I missed a page??? Think Magicians tv show only worse. Thank goodness no one had to pay for this. IF BIG if you are willing to play along and create your own understanding of the story it could be a two star rating.

Great! Cant wait for the next part

Jljs girl

Ignoring a few grammatical errors, this story is great. I cant wait for the next part!

Great story!

Kade243

I felt it was over all an amazing story that even though I feel like there is not many player decisions and there are quite a few grammatical errors, but I over all was quite impressed with the story after my first play through and can't wait for the 2nd part! There might be quite a few spelling and grammatical errors but I don't feel it took that much out of the game or made it unplayable so keep that in mind.