English is poor – Fancy Love: Interactive Story Review

I would like this game more if the translations were to be improved. Some stories are barely noticable, but others are so bad that I get completely distracted by them! Also, the constant ping-pong b/w character dialogue almost makes me dizzy. I would love if they updated this with better English. ↪️Um...all of them? And here it is many updates later, & new stories continue to be released with poorly written English. Meaning improper use of verbs, tenses, etc. I suggest hiring an English proofreader &/or translator. Heck! I'll even volunteer!
Review by Lyndavon II on Fancy Love: Interactive Story.