intoduction has incorrect grammar and spelling – Write a Book First Time Author Review

In the introduction the word, “brake,” is incorrect. when she says, “Brake down,” the word should be, “Break, ... not brake.” Brake means to stop. “Break,” means to seperate or cause to separate into pieces as a result of a blow, shock or strain or make non- functioning. Also, she left out the word, “or,” between “you,” and “someone.” I am going to download but have my doubts about someone showing me how to write when they can’t. I will submit a different rating after I use it.
Review by Sylar 4444 on Write a Book First Time Author.