The game is fun, but the writing is poor – Gamebook Adventures: Infinite Universe Review

I am using the first paragraph in page 228 in my classroom. I'll use it to show my students what a comma disaster looks like. Seriously, though, the writing is quite poor at times. Nobody expects Shakespeare, but there's a couple of passages that are unacceptable. Still, the game is fun and the story seems intriguing. I's just annoying how careless writing gets in the way.
Review by Canovaccio on Gamebook Adventures: Infinite Universe.