Great, but some problems I encounter. – Gacha Memories - Visual Novel Review

I'd like to say that this game is awesome, but It would be better if you fixed some bugs, like it automatically closing the game out when I try to save after Sol's battle. Then again, could just be my iPod. But can you fix some of the grammar issues as well? I sometimes get confused.
Review by Dolan C on Gacha Memories - Visual Novel.