Needs work – Twin Flames Review

The story has many grammatical errors that needs to be fixed. The story at some moments seems rushed as well. When the “blue flamed” character trains with another character the training was so short it felt more like a show off of strength than a training. What I will saw now is a personal preference but this story deals with minor biblical references. It’s not that the story speaks about biblical things but the story is based on a holy, religious world which I’m not interested in. Just listing this down just in case people aren’t in to it either.
Review by Royal-Mika on Twin Flames.