Not bad – Lost on Infinity – Audiobook 1 Review

I would've enjoyed this alot more if the entire story had been animated. The story is cute though, but at the same time a little hard to understand and follow. It's because it needed more animation to illustrate the story to make it more understandable. The entire thing gets lost and loses the audience by mixing stills and animation. You shouldve decided one over the other so it would've not made the story so confusing and very distracting.An idea needs to be the same throughout. As an animator, it's a good start but alot of the animation was way too stiff and not too fluid. I think with more practice youll get there :) But the acting was readable too. Im sure youve watched different animated movies and shorts as well as other different animations, movies, and tv shows to get inspiration and ideas. Keep doing that! Itll definitely help! The modeling of the characters were pretty good though and the environments were pretty cool. I think with more polish and finesse this project would turn out alot better than how it us right now. Great concept for an app though! Definitely pursue this concept in the future :)!
Review by Edgar Allan Poe100 on Lost on Infinity – Audiobook 1.