Has a ton of potential, but ..... – Love Story : Magical Princess 'dating & life sim' Review

I really love the concept of this game. The background and the little girl you get to take care of are cute. However, there are many issues with this game. 1. The English translation problem One can get the general idea of what is being said by the little girl and the titles of the game. However, the lack of correct grammar on the part of the app creator is distracting to the users (at least it is for me). No there is no "Jan. 1th Year" and "People in Wizard Alley is strange" are just among the grammatical errors in this game. 2. The inability to save where you last left off There really should be an ability to save your game in the cloud. I collected 1,000+ coins over the space of 2 hours and when I came back to the game I was back down to 200 coins were I was prior to having collected the coins. 3. The free play could be made better Five coins every 30 seconds is way too little. I understand that the maker of the app has to make some money, but it would be a little bit more enjoyable to play the game (and because of that then one would be positively compelled to buy the "extras" in the game) as a free player if one could get say 20 coins every 30 seconds rather than just five. 4. Things just cost too many coins for the amount of coins you get as a free player in the game This is another free play issue. If one were change the amount of free coins to the 20 coins/30 seconds mentioned, then the high price of items wouldn't be so much of a problem. But since you gain so little coins it just makes the game a headache rather than enjoyable. But..... There are good elements to this game. The little girl is adorable and taking care of her minus the difficulty in getting coins needed to progress in the game is fun. I love the items that you can give to her to make her more charming, stronger, etc. I was going to stick with the game to get the cool outfits but I might just delete this app altogether until the changes I suggested are made. If you want a free to play fashion app that will give you a lot of free play enjoyment try CocoPPaPlay. It's more of a fashion game than a child care type of game like this one but it has better free to play function. The maker of the app would do well to take not only my suggestions but to look at other apps like CocoPPaPlay in order to get a better idea of retaining free players and earning customer loyalty.
Review by Booksrgame on Love Story : Magical Princess 'dating & life sim'.