Meh – Runt of the Litter Review

The story was fair to moderate, but the writer needs to understand that without pictures we are left to imagination. If 50 % of the characters are non gendered and use random non gender pronouns then you have given us little to imagine, it was a big distraction. Very few people in real life claim to have no gender at all, if you create a low tech society filled with androgynous drones then you should explain why, it needs to make sense somehow so that it is part of the story and not just an unnecessarily jarring disruption in the flow of your story. Every element of the story should further the story, making a strong presence of sexually androgynous Characters didn't further the story and just smacked of politics.
Review by Kevin claunch on Runt of the Litter.