Potential marred by awkward translation – EPHEMERAL -The residents in the dark- Review

In terms of art, music, story, and characters it looks to be a good mobile otome and none of that "free" wait or pay to play stuff. Just pay once and go. That's nice. It looks like there is an option to play for free and wait if you want to though. The problem is it seems to be hidden under an awkward translation. I recommend having someone comb through it and fix it and then include it in a update. It looks so promising but it's a shame how awkward the translation is. It feels dry and stiff if that makes any sense. I want to give this four or five stars but can't when the translation is the way that it is. If you can get over that go for it but keep it in mind.
Review by R@nd0mg@m3r0123 on EPHEMERAL -The residents in the dark-.