A story to remember (my first baby) – Hyena Simulator Review

Squeak was the sound coming from our den the baby was next to her father wiggling i nuzzled her and set down a piece of carcass she was being weaned me and her father watched excitedly as she nibbled at it 'whoosh' you leapt out of the den cheetahs were nearing they looked hungry i grabbed my baby and nodded to my mate i rushed out of the den i heard them follow i panted until I arrived a small hole like ditch sat in the center of an oasis i dove in breathing heavy as I heard growls and grunts then it fell silent i peeked my head out no one was there but some sleeping rabbits in a patch of grass you raced back your mate injured but waiting you helped him bandage it up then you continued to fix your nesting place and fell asleep. THE END
Review by P>J>R on Hyena Simulator.