Needs to be proof read – Town of Tides Review

Honestly, I only played the game for about a minute but immediately I can tell the dialogue wasn’t gone over by a publisher/editor that either 1) Has good grammar 2) Doesn’t speak/understand English very well It’s a bit distracting and I’m having a hard time understanding what the characters are trying to get across. If I were the game developer I would fix this as soon as you can, if you don’t know anyone that can do both number 1 and 2 you should definitely reach out.
Review by TokineYukimora on Town of Tides.